You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write =a letter to the accommodation officer at college-
1. Describe the situation.
2. Explain the problem and why it is difficult to work
3. Say what kind of accommodation you prefer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a hostler of B- Block, Nile hostel, currently pursing Masters of Computer Application and currently in the final year. Kindly consider this letter as a complaint against my present room partner.
At present, I am sharing the room with a student from vocational studies and he is un-cooperative and irresponsible. As you might be aware of the fact that, final exams are due next month and his arrogant behavior is making things difficult for me to study at the room. I get time for self-study only during late nights, since I work part-time post college, while at that time, he intentionally plays loud music.
The person is a party freak and a chain smoker. Moreover, his friends are notorious and keep visiting the room at odd hours. Furthermore, they play deafening music and create a lot of disturbance not just for me but for other students in the surroundings as well. As an attempt to sort out things, I tried resolving the issues, however, he is unapproachable.
Considering his ill-mannered nature and the shortage of time for the final year exams, I request you to kindly provide me a single accommodation so that I can focus on the preparations for my upcoming examinations.
Looking forward for a quick action.
Yours’s Faithfully,
Alex Jhonson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oom partner. At present, I am sharing the room with a student from vocational ...
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Line 11, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing examinations. Looking forward for a quick action. Yours's Faithfully...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96347031963 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03309105951 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680365296804 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2427560103 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5833333333 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144101347774 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453017407097 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476874064547 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0526989049344 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501049134952 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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