TPO 30 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People show different attitudes towards how we work during the week While some argue that it is better to work only 3 days a week for longer hours, in my opinion, I give my vote to the idea that we should work eight hours a day and five days a week. There are three reasons supporting my view which will be explored in the below essay.
First and foremost, workers cannot maintain their focus or concentration for too many hours in a day. Consequently, the productivity is low when employees need to spend hours taking breaks. There have some researches asserting that working eight hours optimizes the creativity and productivity. My own experience is a compelling example. My previous company allowed flexible working time and I chose to work 13 hours a day on Mondays, Tuesdays and Wednesdays. At the beginning, I thought that I could finish my work with flying colors in three week days so that I could spend more time with my family. However, the outcome was seriously stricken as I felt too tired to work for thirteen hours without interruption. When I shifted back to normal working schedule of 8 hours a day, my productivity returned to normal as usual.
Secondly, it is detrimental to workers´ mental and physical health when they work for too many hours consecutively. Their brain will be exhausted which can cause cognitive impairment in the long term. Besides, it is also harmful to eyes with extensive exposure to computer monitor not to mention severe issues to employees´backbone under continuous sitting.
Last but not least, it is a waste of time and bored when people have four days without working. Many hours of those days are usually spent on oversleeping or watching television or playing video games which are also bad for health. Moreover, humans seem to spend more money on shopping when they have free time which means that they save less for their future.
In conclusion, my view is that the disadvantages of working three days a week for long hours outweigh its advantages. As a result, we should follow the established working standard of five days a week for 8 hours a day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84065934066 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87130366491 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0197182334 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8888888889 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321554678689 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107035721779 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082690632876 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202875901596 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927600608317 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.