Depend upon the condition and purpose of the use, employing animal is not a bad concept. Some people are in the favour of their use while others associated with animal organisations think otherwise. In this essay i will discuss both the views with my opinion in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, animals are used for various human activites such as research, labour, entertainment and food. First and foremost research, all the experiments in laboratory can not be performed on human beings as they involve danger to their life. So, they are done on animals. For example, complex surgery like heart transplant is first conducted in animals. After its success then it is performed in humans. If we have to progress in field of medical sciences we require animals in experiments. It is beneficial not only to humans but also to animals. Even they can be operated later on in their life when they require medical aid. Secondly, in complex jobs like drug sniffing dogs, some animals senses are more improved as compared to humans, for example dog has excellent sense of smell, repltiles can sense vibrations better, there are many other examples. For their better senses they are used to assist people in their job. Proper care along with training is given to them thus they should be regarded as privillaged rather than slaves.
On flip side, there are many field where their use is unnecessary, animals are used to entertain in circus or movies, they are harshly treated during training to perform acts which have no relation to their natural behaviour hence they start loosing their natural traits. As nature has given every life their unique existence so humans should not challenge them. Further, animals are employed as labourers in jungles for lifting heavy logs of wood, as machinery has progressed animals should be given retirement in these field and let them enjoy freedom in nature.
In conclusion, fields where there is an alternative to the animals, they should be excused in them. It will helps in maintaining the biological circle. With proper training and treatment their services can be continued so that we can make progress in science leading to new innovations to serve mankind in best possible way.
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- Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions than an indication of what individuals really want to do in their spare time.To what extent do you agree with this statement? 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...isations think otherwise. In this essay i will discuss both the views with my opi...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ansplant is first conducted in animals. After its success then it is performed in hum...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...success then it is performed in humans. If we have to progress in field of medical...
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Line 3, column 896, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to assisting'.
Suggestion: used to assisting
...mples. For their better senses they are used to assist people in their job. Proper care along ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun field seems to be countable; consider using: 'many fields'.
Suggestion: many fields
...than slaves. On flip side, there are many field where their use is unnecessary, animals...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'fields'?
Suggestion: fields
...slaves. On flip side, there are many field where their use is unnecessary, animals...
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Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...they should be excused in them. It will helps in maintaining the biological circle. W...
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Line 7, column 304, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...ing to new innovations to serve mankind in best possible way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00537634409 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5472582682 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572580645161 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1472812151 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145755874559 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473281308662 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495372530766 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105109397542 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750649795049 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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