Polygamy has increased widely in recent years. What solutions can you bring forward to decrease this issue?
In some countries Polygamy has been accepted widely due to religious and cultural. This is not a new practice it's in our tredition, during king ruling period kings had more than one wife and some wife have more than one husband. Some people argue that this type of marriage status is harmful to families.
Moreover, the polygamy changed in many countries it's comes under law, if a person married more than a man or woman, law justifies it was a crime, in country like India extra martial was taboo in 1952. However, some countries like India, Singapore and Malaysia only Muslim people have rights to wedding more than one wife. Also, in India it was banded for other religious.
In today era some man/woman not happy with their unsatisfied life they are searching for another shoulder to cry and share feelings, but the legal law not accepting this kind of activities, if they want to change spouse/ husband they need to go as per legal notice documents. So, the external marriage or other relationship is not acceptable.
My point of view, by reducing polygamy is the only way to do love marriage, it breaks all the problem by loving each other they won’t search for other shoulder, each of them has good understanding, feeling, empathy, love etc.
In conclusion polygamy can be very harmful to family members especially for women and children. So, the whole society should work together to prevent this issue from happening through education and legislation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: it's; it is
...nd cultural. This is not a new practice its in our tredition, during king ruling pe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ning through education and legislation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91164658635 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5411374854 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646586345382 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8549855648 50.4703680194 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.181818182 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0862242724093 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036329657867 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341450586083 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0505122115544 0.151781067708 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409418142816 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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