The pie charts below show the main reasons why students chose to study at a particular UK university in 1987 and 2007

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
...Ahmed, Hope my letter finds you well, i am writing to check if you are still in...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , i
...evision. Let me explain in more details,i am going to immigrate to Australia with...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...vision. Let me explain in more details,i am going to immigrate to Australia with...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rate to Australia within four months as i told you last time we met.my Papers are...
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Line 4, column 175, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Since
... in process for last round in the cycle.Since i will immigrate i am looking forward t...
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Line 4, column 175, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... in process for last round in the cycle.Since i will immigrate i am looking forward t...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ocess for last round in the cycle.Since i will immigrate i am looking forward to ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...und in the cycle.Since i will immigrate i am looking forward to sell all domestic...
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Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to selling'.
Suggestion: to selling
...e i will immigrate i am looking forward to sell all domestic items i have. my televisio...
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Suggestion: My
...ward to sell all domestic items i have. my television is 45 inches with more featu...
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Suggestion: , HDMI
... with more features like full HD support,HDMI and access to interent.its possible to ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hotos or videos from your phone gallary.i own my television just for 5 months and...
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Line 4, column 530, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...television just for 5 months and really i feel sorry to sell for foreign man. i...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...i feel sorry to sell for foreign man. if you interested you can call me or you c...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...i have to work from 8AM untill 5.30PM. looking forward to hear from you. Best Wishe...
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Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...rom 8AM untill 5.30PM. looking forward to hear from you. Best Wishes, Sherif
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, still, well, i feel, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53503184713 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49107294954 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662420382166 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 107.889861536 43.030603864 251% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00820493766471 0.215688989381 4% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00280126501665 0.103423049105 3% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00626381900023 0.0843802449381 7% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00243493268311 0.15604864568 2% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00486986536623 0.0819641961636 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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