In this era of globalisation, advanced technologies have touched all sphere of life and television is one among them,which became considerably popular by the 20th century.Whereas,radios have been used from the early years and still continue to use.As it still exist as a question whether TV or radio is better for news, let us discuss on this topic and reach to a conclusion.
On one hand, most of the people believe that radios are better to get news compared to television as it is readily accessible.Radios are mobile and because of its light weight,it can be taken anywhere as per our wish. For example,we could listen to radios while riding or cooking.Many of the gadgets have radios incorporated in it, for example, mobile phones.
On the other hand,television is said to be the best way to know about news.Television have brought a great dominance in this modern world. It has opened a wide range of channels. Unlike radios, television stands one step ahead, because it gives news visually as well, which is not possible by radios.Most of the people consider television not only for getting news but also as a source of entertainment.people get more ideas about the incident when they could see about it.For example, in 2018,Flood happened in kerala drastically. It was through television we happened to know how many of the areas were affected badly.So television can give live updates and news. From 20th century,the usage of television has tremendously increased to an unexpected level because of its influence on viewers.
To sum up, both radios and televisions are better media of communication used extensively from very old decades. But in my opinion, television is one step ahead of radios as it provides audio as well as video visuals.People always look for interesting things which are moving infront of them and are likely to concentrate on them more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, well, whereas, while, for example, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04180064309 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22021188443 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59807073955 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.548067436 49.4020404114 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.8 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229463785374 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854342751963 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457106589881 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136455521819 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200874769611 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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