Which is more vital? a person's heart or a person's wealth? At present, people value more the importance of worldly possessions such as social standing and material riches than one's personal values in which, I certainly disagree. In my opinion, a person's values are as essential as the air that we breathe.
Many people had forgotten that social status, money and all our priceless possessions are from the Creator's grace which He can take away in just a snap of a finger or in a blink of an eye. In contrast, these are just tools for us to use in our everyday endeavors. In a speech, the actor Denzel Washington had stated, " You will never see a U-haul behind a hearse", which he emphasized that we cannot bring all our material possessions to our graves, wherein, in fact, during our Eulogy people will talk about how we treat them, how much act of kindness we had shown and how much good deeds we had done in our lives. For instance, a lot of people like different celebrities and businessmen had gained respect and inspired the majority of people by using their wealth to put up a charitable institution for the impoverished members of society. A lot of stories were foretold about people who were honored because of their integrity, kindness, and honesty, such as a taxi driver who surrendered a bag of money that was left in his vehicle by some tourist to the police station and a citizen who is helping an old lady cross the road and more.
In the end, no person should be judged according to his or her social hierarchy and luxury but because of his or her personal values such as love, charity, being trustworthy and responsible.
- Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 61
- Some people think that students should study in groups Others however believe that students should study alone Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 87
- The bar chart shows the participation of children in selected leisure activities in Australia 11
- The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destination over the same period.Write a report for a 78
- Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for instance, in contrast, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62585034014 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63198500902 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581632653061 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.985232626 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120022540334 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049302972206 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478228461351 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103730570699 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460975667113 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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