Some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events. Is this good or bad thing.
The way of living contended and fulfilling live by various means is individual's choice. Although people are divide upon excessive spending on tickets to enjoy some sporting and cultural events. this essay delve in both advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon followed by my view.
Firstly, people who earns high amont are used to spend the huge amount for attendeding the sporting and culturls events. this has some of negative impact among the co-workers or friends.this is because they consider it as showoff of individuals' financial status which will draw a line in the relationship. secondly, some of middle class people will try to impersonate the other by borrowing the money and eventually endup by lossing everything.
On the other hand, some one who have sacrified their personal life to achieve the thier strong financial status are tend to spend money to have fulfilling life by attending various means of entertainment events. For an example, Indian Premier League, if some one want to have best experience of watching live cricket match on the ground, they must pay high tickets and high salaried person are paying it to have best experiences to themselves and their families. secondly, such high amount paied for entertainment actually creates the job opportunities in society. such people can be the role model for other and inspire other to give their best efforts to achieve one's goal and to live their dream life. Moreover, such high earning people need to maintain their eco-social status to showcase it sometime they pay high amount on tickets and get noticed by the other spectators.
To conclude, perception of contended life is different for different people and there is no harm in spending extra amount of money to achieve memorable experience of any event if individual is earning enough.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1677852349 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73711978046 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53355704698 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4568319619 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.333333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227163125336 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940463841245 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959020715977 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159649339679 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072439740116 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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