A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening.
Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
explain arrangements you have made for them to have keys and get into the house
tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house
say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening
Dear Akka,
I wish I could receive you at the railway station on the morning of 20 May. Unfortunately, I will be reaching home back from by business trip only by 7 pm the same day.
Our neighbour, Mrs Rajeshwari happens to be making it to the station a bit earlier than you- to greet her friend travelling by the 7 am train. She has been kind enough to volunteer to wait with our house keys at the entrance. As your schedule is at 7.10 am, she would not be kept waiting for long.
You both can come home by her car. If she cannot manage to find a driver, you would be hiring a pre-paid taxi from the counter opposite the facade.
Let us make it to the Jalpaan Restaurant that night. They have some exquisite dishes including Italian delicacies and North Indian specialities. It is a long time since I went there, but the last experience keeps beckoning me! Now that you will be here, we will have some real fun too.
I look forward to meet you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sudhankumar C
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'trained'.
Suggestion: trained
...greet her friend travelling by the 7 am train. She has been kind enough to volunteer ...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...ve some real fun too. I look forward to meet you soon. Yours faithfully, Sudhank...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46486486486 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49039645578 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.713513513514 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9687367921 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8333333333 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298235025424 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945993570834 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444621414535 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141755726793 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310224933749 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.