The bar chart below shows the percentage of people living alone in 5 different age groups in the USA between 1850 and 2000.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of residants who lived alone in 5 various age groups in the USA from 1850 to 2000.
Overall, the percentage increased in all groups over this period . Also, The 55-64 age group was by far the most common age that people tend to live alone.There were considerable upward trends of 55-64 and 47-54 age group.
Looking at the year 1950 and 2000, the data for 55-64 age group rose from around 9 percent to slightly under 17 percent . There was a rise by nearly 6 percent in 47-54 age group.In 1950 , the percentage of people from 27 to 36 years old was 0.4 percent less than that of 37-46 group.After half of a decade , it rose significantly to 8 percent which was 4 percent higher than that of 37-46 group.
Moving to 1850 to 1990 , USA witnessed insignificant roses by around 3 percent for the proportion of 47-54 and 55-64 group.Over this period, The data for 37-46 group remained unchanged at nearly above 2 percent.After 50 years , while the figure for people from 17-26 still did not exist, that for 27-36 group appeared at 2.3 percent in 1990.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59278350515 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53463508222 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572164948454 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.7382136639 43.030603864 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.5 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3333333333 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261454731178 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168837235384 0.103423049105 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121182838069 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215016405937 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131383007704 0.0819641961636 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.84 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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