Some people think that news and media are affecting our lives in a positive way. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
News and media have become an indispensable part of people live’s. I agree that these are impacting us in a positive way by entertaining us and keeping us informed about the latest events.
Media is the vital source of entertaining stuff which rejuvenates and entertain us at any moment of the day. Due to the compulsion of businesses and conflicts in families, everybody has a lot of stress in daily life. Listening to music and watching videos give us a relief from the monotony of work and relaxation from family problems. For instance, I am a software engineer who spend around 2 hours every night to watch a comedy show on television which energised me for the next day. Thus, the media play an important role in improving the productivity of people.
As the world is changing rapidly, it is crucial to keep oneself updated with the latest developments and how these are affecting our lives. News provides us a deep knowledge and background of the newest events. As a result, this makes very easy for people to take a wise decision against the current affairs. For example, when India government recently decided to build a road through national park, the news informed people about the disastrous consequences of the project. A campaign by people compelled the government to abandon the project.
To conclude, In my opinion, the news and media influence people live’s in a positive way as they entertain us and assist us in making a fruitful decision against current developments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89043900283 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592885375494 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5859610285 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3076923077 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187766201282 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062629288677 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594397448615 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130318335351 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661169819019 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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