With an increasing overweight population some people think universities should make sport a compulsory module on all degree courses.To what extent do you agree?
Obesity is becoming a pressing problem in many areas of the world. According to some, sport ought to be teach as a compulsory subject in all streams of tertiary education. In my opinion, the trend will have many positive outcomes since it will make youngsters aware about sport’s benefits and save national wealth from health awareness programs.
The lack of health education among individuals is a prominent reason of overweight population. Due to this, they are inclining towards the high calorie foods and neglecting physical exercise. Having a mandatory subject ‘Sport’ in university curriculum, the youngsters will get to know about how physical activities make us fit and keep our body away from several diseases such as hypertension, stress. Also, this will develop a sense of healthy life among readers and encourage them to devote some time to sports from their daily routine.
Every years the governments spend a spending of billions dollars in imparting health education among people. Teaching sports as a part of education will help youngsters in learning healthy lessons and importance of sports in human life. This will reduce the marketing of health campaign to a large extent and the government can use this segment of money in other domains like education, public transportation and saving environment that make a nation economically prosperous.
In conclusion, I believe that the compulsion of sport subject in university curriculum is impressive step to rise health awareness among people and saving national’s wealth from health education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4593495935 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0280078242 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626016260163 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6564023153 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.090909091 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115623889454 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452529934842 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038329422012 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747913916777 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153096026993 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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