Large shopping malls are replacing small local shops in cities and towns. In your own experience, is it a positive development?
Recently, the phenomenon of developing large shopping malls and replacing with the small ones in big cities and its corrsponding impacts has sparked a heated debat. Although this replacing is beneficial as it is regarded by the substantial number of individuals both constructive and positive, others hold opponent views. I am incliend to believe that this issue can be plus as it could develop some brilliant aspects for it adherents.
From a social standpoint, constructing large shopping markets and eliminating the number of small ones can provide the society with noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact of development. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered these advantages. Firslty, large shopping malls can provide suitable range of prices for customers. Due to the fierce competition between shopping markets, the prices are always in the standard range. Furthermore, these large shopping centers provide a considerable number of facilities including parking lots, the customer service and have a veriaty of marketing departments which meet all of the customers' needs.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that the idea of diminishing the number of small shopping centers and building the large ones in big cities has some opponents. According to research undertaken by a prestigious world-renowned university, families have the propensity to have the easy access for purchasing the initial things and it is crystal clear that the large shopping malls cannot be instructed in every places and streets.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the merits of expanding the large shopping centers and motivating inhabitatnts to utilize them instead of the small ones are far more outweigh their demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, so, while, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43252595156 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99412146596 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57785467128 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.7760844151 50.4703680194 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.727272727 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2727272727 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328229588628 0.242375264174 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120580466843 0.0925447433944 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778340556473 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184137093515 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423971530794 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 12.6369458128 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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