Considering business of some country's tourism is the major among other sectors of economic development. It is thought by some that it has produced more critical issues than it actually solves. In my opinion, some countries are largely depends on the tourism as their source of income and building quality life and has greatly benefited particularly to the individual whereas it also has created issues in country as a whole which is more severe that it does solve in the country.
Admittedly, with regard to individual, tourism business helps local people of the particular famous place to run business more effectively. In other words, the famous place where tourists visit are hyped by the people around and the cost of the food and stay are usually higher that the other places. For example, the price of restaurant and hotel are doubled in the place near Boudha stupa that the areas little far from the stupa as it is tourist attraction areas. Furthermore, a numbers of people are getting job opportunities due to tourism business and rates of unemployment in the country will be reduced. Large number of tourist means larger income hence people will meet the standard of quality life. Majorly government is getting huge amount of taxes to get permit entry to the specific country and the currency exchange between the countries strengthen the power of the country.
Although tourism can be beneficial, specially ecomically, to the host destination, there are many strings attached to it. Not only they affect the culture of the country but also consumes tremendous amount of resources and produce enough waste. Over consumption of any resources caused scarcity of resources leading to unavoidable problems of the country. For example, it is not acceptable to wear skin showing clothes in Muslim country as per their culture. Tourist from thecountry hanging out in shot clothes in such places can be ethically wrong to Muslim people and the younger generation get intimidated by seeing those and might try to wear like them which is against their culture ethics.
In conclusion, advantages of tourism business is mainly to the particular destination whereas the negative effects can be on the country as a whole as the enormous number of tourist can cause detrimental effect environmentally as well as culturally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...siness more effectively. In other words, the famous place where tourists visit ar...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11315789474 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74791661198 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531578947368 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5168541723 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.533333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224603125255 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073687859272 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464409335106 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134632790647 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577813062695 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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