Some people believe positive thinking has benefits, while others consider it has drawbacks.
Discuss both these views, and give your own opinion.
The concept of positive thinking has been around us from years, which has eventually forced people to believe that this always proves to be beneficial, while there are some who still consider it as a major drawback. In this essay, we will emphasize on both the side of the argument and then will produce my opinion.
We have often heard of “A well begin is half done” conceptually it is nothing except a way of creating powerful ideology in mind which can enable the individual work with more efficiency without thinking about the outcome of it. Moreover, this enables the person to think on the better side if any situation, which further develops a habitat to overcome any difficult circumstances. For example, Mark Peterson, an iron man runner was diagnosed with spinal cancer a week before this final event and doctors told him not to run otherwise the condition could turn worse, collecting his mental fitness and mindset together he ran and created a world record in it. Even psychologist says that children focusing on the fruitful side are more likely to handle pressure effectively and act wisely.
On the contrast, not considering some obvious pitfall in the war means that the person is still living in an imaginary world. The ability to see and analyze the break or threat in day to day life is of at most important. There are many instances, where people tend to realize the only beneficial side, which further makes them fall deep inside in the trap. Some similar feeling was experienced by Nokia CEO in 2005 while refusing to put down robots in the manufacturing unit, initially, he thought that only his skillful workers are capable of doing the same. Further, the industry was taken up by automation which resulted threw Nokia out of the market.
To sum up, although seeing on the constructive side in every condition helps to boost the morale as well as empower him to make good decisions, but simply skipping the other side can affect a lot more than excepted, if not taken care of. Meanwhile, I think that creating a blend of both wherein the independent person creates a mentality of going through the useful things while giving equal importance to stuff which can hold him back in the progress, would be a better approach for the far future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, still, then, well, while, for example, i think, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82908163265 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55164150602 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0401131688 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.615384615 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1538461538 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140764515404 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443666253618 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532766365832 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923196075767 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666906998111 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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