Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past.This behaviour is now having a negative imapact on society.Discuss
Nowadays, younger generation failed miserably to respect their elders as they used to do decades ago. This bitter reality is having a negative influence on society. In my experience, the immediate cause behind such drift is the ignorance shown by parents towards their children at early age thus increase in the cases of family separation is its direct result.
Certainly, in the past, the youngsters respect their elders because ethos and moral values were inculcated in them by their parents. But, presently, most of the upbringers are working around the clock and hardly find any time to spend with their children. This results in less interaction and poor understanding between them. For instance, majority of my colleagues work late nights and rarely talk with their offsprings about hardships they face at schools. To be more precise, they failed to act as the sounding board for their children. Hence, teenager find it hard to respect them, which at the end results in the separation of family.
Another factor that contributes to the growth of disrespectful children is the education they receive is much better than what their parents got. Thanks to accessibility of new age technology, youngsters have become smarter and more intelligent in contrast to the past. Evidence to this can be provided by any young individual who can operate his father's smartphone far better than him. This creates a false sense of superiority among todays generation and they often look down upon their parents and disrespects them.
From the facts discussed above, it is lucid that upbringing is the main cause of lacking respect among adoloscent for their parents. The new sources of knowledge are adding fuel to the fire and making this trend even more disturbing.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, thus, for instance, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13194444444 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66253115382 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618055555556 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0051384763 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276563204003 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856681459617 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580790239376 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15447343951 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529997203305 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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