Nowadays people’s life is changing rapidly and, as a result, family relationships are affected. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience
In recent times, the rate at which the lives of individuals are changing is at a rapid rate and this has affected relationships in families. This essay will argue that the advantages of these changes outweigh the drawbacks. The essay will examine some of the major disadvantages such as lack of family time and isolation, then analyze the positives which are better quality of life and access to modern facilities, before giving my opinion.
There are a number of reasons why families are experiencing changes nowadays. A major reason is the fact that member are moving to new locations for better opportunities. The aim is to increase earnings which would in turn improve the life of the person. For instance, there are people who have relocated to other parts of world for greener pastures and a better life. Furthermore, these new locations often provide access to modern facilities such as rail networks and new technological initiatives like the internet and modern healthcare system.
However, there are several disadvantages that cause a strain in family relationships. The distance and busy lifestyle of most individuals who tend to move to new locations often make them isolated and most times unreachable. There are several barriers to communication such as time zone differences and the cost. For example, a resident of the United States who has family members in Nigeria will not be readily available to receive phone call due to the 6-hour difference in time. This could lead to homesickness due to little or no family time which has been known to cause depression and other psychological challenges.
To conclude, it is clear that rapid changes in people’s lives cause sicknesses such as depression due to isolation. While there are some benefits such as access to improved facilities and earrings, I believe that family relationships should be valued above all.
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15960912052 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93609499166 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534201954397 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.140530916 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167984128494 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578421092901 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483391495425 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106750874174 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579891556843 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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