Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It’s more important to use your own knowledge and experience than ask for advice from others to solve problems.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It’s more important to use your own knowledge and experience than ask for advice from others to solve problems.

How to solve a problem seems to be a complex thing for the most of individuals . There is some doubt whether we should try our best to solve the problems or we are able to ask someone for a favor . Large quantities of dwellers approve of making a solution to it by ourselves . Nevertheless , bye contrast , I prefer to get advices from others.

Above all, others can be more calm to deal with the problem than you when facing difficulties . As the saying goes” lookers-on see most of the game “ When meeting some difficulties , we are often so anxious that we can’t find the origin of the problem at a time .Whereas , people around you may have a comprehensive understanding of this trouble , which can be great benefit of working out the problem . Take myself for an example . Last year , because of my careless , I lost my lovely dog when taking him for work . So worried was I that there was nothing I could but cry. After acquiring that I was in big trouble , without hesitation , my friends came immediately in the meanwhile , they provided me with lots of suggestions to deal with the problem . Without their assistance , I would have lost my dear dog forever .

In addition , there will be more options for you to choose if asking people for help . There is no doubt that there can be various of ways to deal with a problem . However , when you walk into a predicament ,you may be so anxious that you can’t find a proper way to work out it . But if you ask advices from you friends, I believe there is going be countless appropriate solutions . For instance , last month when our school was going to celebrate a special day , the headmaster put up a notification which said that in order to appeal to all of you to participate in our celebration , I sincerely invite our students to think about some different ways to show your talents or do something meaningful . After knowing , us students were all enthusiastic about it , as a consequence most of the students equipped with sharp minds came up with a variety of ideas which offered a brilliant platform to show the capabilities of we students .

From these ,it’s obvious for us to obtain that asking others for help is such a significant and valuable thing . Therefor , I would express my preference to get advices from others .

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67821782178 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74751578252 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524752475248 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.3401733112 48.9658058833 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4736842105 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2631578947 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 78.0 5.5376344086 1409% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235323387138 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763238274063 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571185883179 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154753218387 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041670741191 0.0645574589148 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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