Question: some people think making more money is being happier.
What do you think? Can money buy happiness?
In today's world money has become the most significant base to carry out any sort of transactions. Few people have an understanding that making more money would make them happier. I opine money is important for meeting numerous expenses but happiness can only be felt through true emotions.
Money has become the utmost priority in everyone's life. People work so hard to earn money in the form of salaries or pay checks. Is it possible to live without cash in today's time even for a day? No, it is certainly not possible. Many people have certain loans going on be it educational or personal. So if they don't get salaries they would not be able to pay back regularly. Also, money is needed for mundane task of the month like groceries, dairy and for paying bills. If bills aren't paid, there could be permanent shutdown of phones or electricity. Certainly, completing this task gives us some relief but that's not overall happiness.
Happiness is the true emotion which comes only when we are happy in real terms. It can never be fake at any point if time. But it is also connected with money. For instance, children's become joyful when they are provided an ice cream. Not to forget, ice creams comes only when the amount is paid for it. Not everyone is born with a golden spoon and not all are affluent. Impoverished class also try to keep their family happy even though they are not able to manage basic necessities of life.
To conclude, money is required to fulfill certain expenses and yes it is somewhere connected with happiness but it cannot completely overshadow it. Happiness is finding our families happy and that's how best moments can be revived for ever.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7133105802 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47481931294 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60409556314 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4208053798 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.7619047619 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9523809524 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90476190476 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25537547981 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711206188098 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654965621801 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169964115211 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751608604268 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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