People should get retire to made a way for young people. Give opinion
In this modern world, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on how retirement affect to contry's economy. While some people argue that the disadvantages overweigh the advantages of it, on my point of view retirement give more benefits to a country. In this essay, I shall discuss on the factors, while analyzing both sides of it.
First and foremost, there are myriad of advantages in retirement such as it gives opportunity for younger people to find employments. For example, young people have more creative ideas, according to the prevailing market conditions. Consequentely, organizations can restructure or reshape their marketing strategies with the contribution of their ideas. If old people get extention in their job contracts there will be frustration among young people which would be used in harmeful ways by riots.
On the other hand, ageing population is a global issue in this current context. For instance, some governments have to incurr lucrative expenditure of funds in pension payments. Moreover, organizations can use old people's skill and expertisism in their field of work for the betterment of the country as well. In addition, working will reduce the frustration of the elderly people because, they are with less family commitments and have more time compared with a young personal who has more obligations in office a nd home as well.
In conclusion, it is recommended to manage a balance an optimal level of young and elderly population inside an organization in maximizing profits. It is also beleived that, governments have to implement a contributory pension scheme to mitigate the burden of paying pensions to elderly people together with introducing new courses to the education system to cater the modern world employement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...on my point of view retirement give more benefits to a country. In this essay, I ...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s with the contribution of their ideas. If old people get extention in their job c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...more time compared with a young personal who has more obligations in office a nd ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 5.75862068966 313% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30960854093 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04356400842 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601423487544 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9527627527 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.769230769 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234517996593 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786525996336 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673690258675 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132310142315 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797630477662 0.0609392437508 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.