The given table illustrates the differences in the figure of employees and factories in England and Wales during in the period from 1851 to 1901.
Overall, England and Wales witnessed a downward trend in numbers of employees and an upward trend in establishing of factories.
It is clear that the requirement of male labor was higher than female counterparts, but in the year 1861, the number of female employees higher than male employees of 29,220 employees. However, in both these countries the amount of labor expected dramatic declined constantly from 477,100 employees (in which 287,100 males and 190,000 females) to 61,000 employees (31,000 males and 30,000 females) during 1800s and the initial of 1900s.
In contrast, in England and Wales as day follows day many factories were constituted.
In the first year of the table the number of factories stood at 225 and soared to 721 factories in 1881, despite of an upward trend in 1891 this number was documented significant decreased to 625 and by the end of the research, a marginal reduction of 25 factories was reported.
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- The Graph show the proportion of the population 65 aged and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.-Syerapke- (rewrite) 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'during the 1800s'.
Suggestion: during the 1800s
...ployees 31,000 males and 30,000 females during 1800s and the initial of 1900s. In contrast,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04469273743 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74622916037 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536312849162 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2499483684 43.030603864 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.5 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363090101592 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190436029805 0.103423049105 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136621639456 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216665189771 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135511335459 0.0819641961636 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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