Fast food is a part of life in many place. Some people think this has bad effects on lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons.
In many countries of the world today, Fast food has become a part of their everyday life. A number of people believe that this trend has a negative effect of diet and way of people live their lives. This essay agrees with this opinion and will argue that health challenges, low nutritional value and lack of family time are some of the downsides of this development.
To begin with, the reliance on the consumption of such meals have detrimental effects on health. This is because they are high in calories, fat and other chemicals that are added to make them appealing to the eye as well as having a longer shelf life. A resultant effect of eating these fatty food is obesity which is a major issue in many places where the consumption is high. Other health issues that it can lead to are diabetes and cardiovascular problems. A lot of people nowadays suffer from excessive weight as a result of quick meals.
Furthermore, it affects the way we live our daily lives. The institution of the family values such as eating together while spending quality time has is now of no importance. The home cooked meals that offer very high nutritional contents have been replaced with eating out which adversely affects the time families spend with one another. Most employees have turned to processed foods due to their busy work schedule and because they have little or no time to cook a decent meal.
In conclusion, it is clear that junk causes several health challenges and has negatively affect the way we live our lives. People must reduce their dependence on them in a bid to eat nutritious meals and live a healthy and productive life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 325, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ional value and lack of family time are some of the downsides of this development. To be...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'affected'.
Suggestion: affected
...al health challenges and has negatively affect the way we live our lives. People must ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7212543554 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51303827302 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9390363163 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7857142857 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180336910536 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617173151064 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682845773023 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116685821524 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109479712947 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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