You have a permanent job, and few weeks ago you have started a part-time short course. You are not satisfied with it and want to change this part time course. Write a letter to your professor explaining why you are not satisfied with your present part-time course, and stating which course you would prefer and why.
Dear John,
I am Mary, a student of your economics batch. I am writing this letter in regards to change my part-time course from Economics to Human Resources, as unfortunately I am not satisfied continuing with economics classes.
As you are aware that along with this part-time course, I am working permanently with a major IT company where I have to spend around 9-10 hours of my day on a regular basis. Current schedule of economics class is 4 PM to 6 PM every alternate day of the week, which mostly does not go well with my office hours. Along with that I have to drive around 30 mins from my home to take this class, as this is being organized in downtown. Whereas the Human resource sessions are mostly scheduled at 8 PM to 9 PM on weekends, which I think will be more suitable to me and fit to my office schedule as well. Also, these classes are held comparatively closer from my home, which will definitely save my travel time too. Last but not the least, I think human resource will be a better alternative for my future growth in comparison to studying economics.
I hope you will understand my problems and help me in smooth transitioning from Economics to Human resource.
your's faithfully
Mary
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...onomics batch. I am writing this letter in regards to change my part-time course from Economi...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
... am working permanently with a major IT company where I have to spend around 9-10 hours...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...ng from Economics to Human resource. yours faithfully Mary
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, whereas, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60550458716 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71285194825 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591743119266 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.5054835476 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215667220666 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879881650742 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933666230626 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134574825257 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454968640181 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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