You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
– say where you are going
– describe your house
– explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house.
Dear John,
Thanks again for agreeing to look after my house, I really appreciate it.
As I’ve mentioned before, I’m going to Spain for the whole month, but hopefully I will have Internet connection, so you can write me anytime except a few days when I will be out of the town.
So, my house is pretty big and you can use both floors. We have three free rooms up stairs and it is up to you to choose one for you. You can also use all the facilities in the house like laundry, garage, backyard and grill.
The only few things that I would like you to do are to check the mailbox once a day, I’m waiting for an important letter from my university. And another thing is to turn off the electricity and water when you get out of the house.
Let me know if you need any help or you have any questions.
Best regards,
Anna
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, another thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24412427241 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68125 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0195023694 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218932218914 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849495209417 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359575010753 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112834408222 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033459055859 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.35 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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