Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.Use specific reasons and examples to support you
I disagree strongly. There is no logical reason for that opinion. Everyone has own ability and is susceptible to do specific jobs. Let's to explain distinctly:
Parents should give their children liberty for choosing their future. Humans are to live just one time, nobody can't urge them to do something they do not like it. According to ethics and human rights, children must not be sacrified for parents and ancestors.
May be some stereotypes among family have been cultivating amply! The clan's members are loyal to it. For instance, all descendants should become engineer or should become a merchant!. If someone break the rule, he or she will be dumped by his folks as a criminal. In the current century, it is not justifiable. I wish it was not considered as an asset in many families.
There are some rigorous parents, who do not want exterminate their nenown at a specific job!. Moreover, they have prepared a suitable platform for their children to do not have to start business from zero. They want the inheritors keep family's inheritances alive and at the same time increase it and vouch it for them even after death!.It is related to human instinct that like be immortal and his or her name keep living for many years.
In this era, youths will have been choosing future by the day parents will leave them. By progressing knowledge and awareness, implying fate to not only children, but also any one, does not make any sense! Civilization needs to variety range of skills and dispersing people along the world. It is indespeancbale.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- TOEFL T P O 26 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on the cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.Use specific reasons and 85
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TPO 53 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...umans are to live just one time, nobody cant urge them to do something they do not l...
^^^^
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
Suggestion: cants
...umans are to live just one time, nobody cant urge them to do something they do not l...
^^^^
Line 3, column 5, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...crified for parents and ancestors. May be some stereotypes among family have been...
^^
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'breaks'.
Suggestion: breaks
...r should become a merchant!. If someone break the rule, he or she will be dumped by h...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 336, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...and vouch it for them even after death!.It is related to human instinct that like ...
^^
Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...ing fate to not only children, but also any one, does not make any sense! Civilization ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 265.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83773584906 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65584787702 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633962264151 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.6349960638 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4117647059 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5882352941 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70588235294 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199615258036 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566235968743 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644410395682 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997983024556 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647115898764 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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