With an increasing population communicating via Internet and text message, face to face communication will become a thing in the past.To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, technology has paved its way to popularity with having massive number of users. Computers and cellphones are only a few of the medium in the usage of the internet. The writer agrees to the proposition that personal interaction will soon be outdated and will discuss in this essay the advantages of using the internet as means of exchanging messages.
Communication is an important factor for humans in order to build a strong relationship. Although face to face communication is basically the norm, people have already embraced and utilized the internet and SMS messaging as an avenue to get in touch with their loved ones and friends.
Various social media applications have been created to aid the need of being in contact, especially to those who are living or working far from home. Moreover, these means of virtual contact is not only accessible to people but is economical because it is very affordable despite its mobility and demand. Everyone can call and send messages anytime they feel the need to communicate, as long as they have an internet connection on their computers, pocket phones and laptops.
In conclusion, it is a fact that there is no substitute to the feeling of being able to see and personally interact with the people close to you. However, we should be able to adopt to this fast changing world and realize that technology is already on its brink and accept that no matter how new and complicated it may seem, it is somehow beneficial to humans.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pplications have been created to aid the need of being in contact, especially to ...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...e to you. However, we should be able to adopt to this fast changing world and realize th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, moreover, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90118577075 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77879387263 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616600790514 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.4112598335 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16513807664 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589038064891 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639601679386 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988346614826 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852251391616 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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