We recommend that Monarch Books open a café in its store. Monarch, having been in business at the same location for more than twenty years, has a large customer base because it is known for its wide selection of books on all subjects. Clearly, opening the café would attract more customers. Space could be made for the café by discontinuing the children's book section, which will probably become less popular given that the most recent national census indicated a significant decline in the percentage of the population under age ten. Opening a café will allow Monarch to attract more customers and better compete with Regal Books, which recently opened its own café."
The author assumes that the monarch books should copy the idea of regal books of opening a café as an addition to the service it provides primarily, i.e, books, so that it can attract more customers and as a competitive strategy. However, along with this assumption is the conjecture that patrons are agreeable to eat and read at the same time. As mentioned in the text, regal books just expanded the service of café, so we doesn’t know if it is successful or not to duplicate the same thing, and even if it is success in the regal books, Perhaps readers don’t want to try the same thing when in other ambience. Clearly, if the other place or store also gives the same vibes as one, people may not be willing to try monarch books. also, the location of these stores are not mentioned, there is a chance that regal books lies in some naturalistic environment, nearby the beach or fresh air and monarch books in midst of lively downtown, so it doesn’t make sense to drink a coffee enjoying a good read in a noisy surrounding.
Furthermore, monarch books is known for wide variety of books so that the selection gets diversified, so if the removal of children will harm its business rather than getting more visits. many parents would switch to some other store to buy books for their kids, also the children may not enjoy the rush of café for undivided attention to their reading materials. The researcher doesn’t give any statistics relating to the age groups who visits both the stores. For instance; the patrons of regal books are teenagers and youth during their 20’s and that of monarch books are children, elderly people or middle aged person like of 40’s. In that case, the business is definitely going to suffer loss not gain, as their demand and expectation from monarch is not coffee and d
The author must be cautious about children section getting little or no attention just due to the national census of declining children population because it mentions national census of children below 10 years not local population of that particular town. there may lie disparity as children population can be high or in increasing trend in that particular town although declining in the aggregate national population. Such thing exists in real life- Rhode Island is the smallest state in USA but the second largest in population density after the state of New Jersey. Without this calculation, the book shop can’t come to the conclusion of get rid of children section.
many factors still needs to be considered to open a café in monarch books that will add unnecessary stress of operating a books shop along with café. even if the same idea and operation could be best for regal books, it might not result the same for monarch books. some more details, brainstorming and research should be done.
onuts but goods books and wide variety to select from.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 502 350
No. of Characters: 2306 1500
No. of Different Words: 244 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.733 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.594 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.438 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 143 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 109 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 72 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 41.833 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 21.629 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.371 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.646 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.089 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 743, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...ay not be willing to try monarch books. also, the location of these stores are not m...
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Line 6, column 190, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...iness rather than getting more visits. many parents would switch to some other stor...
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Line 12, column 257, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...cal population of that particular town. there may lie disparity as children populatio...
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...sion of get rid of children section. many factors still needs to be considered to...
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Line 14, column 151, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...operating a books shop along with café. even if the same idea and operation could be...
^^^^
Line 14, column 266, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
... not result the same for monarch books. some more details, brainstorming and researc...
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Line 16, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Onuts
...orming and research should be done. onuts but goods books and wide variety to sel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, still, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 11.1786427146 170% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 55.5748502994 106% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 16.3942115768 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2430.0 2260.96107784 107% => OK
No of words: 497.0 441.139720559 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8893360161 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.56307096286 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59297828556 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 204.123752495 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507042253521 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 732.6 705.55239521 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.8473053892 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.4427939543 57.8364921388 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.941176471 119.503703932 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2352941176 23.324526521 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 5.70786347227 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307904277239 0.218282227539 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982005459547 0.0743258471296 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776350982588 0.0701772020484 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169492607092 0.128457276422 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085852047885 0.0628817314937 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.3799401198 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.197005988 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 98.500998004 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 12.3882235529 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.1389221557 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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