Some people think that politicians have greatest influence on the world.Others, however, believe that scientist have the greatest influence.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion
In a salad of Millennium the thinking of society is polarized into two different groups almost equally, regarding the notion that weather the leaders or the doctor's who have more impact on the society. In my opinion, it is not possible to decide whether scientist have more influence or politician do. We can discuss the role of both and compare and contrast there contributions but we cannot state One better than the other.
To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its favour and in contrast. Firstly, leaders are the backbone of every nation. They work hard day and night to improve the well being of country. For instance, prime minister of India is implementing mammoth projects and scheme to improve infrastructure and to boost the economy of the democracy. On the other hand sometime politician indulge in corruption and criminal activities which consequently develop a negative effect in the mind of public.
Shifting to the second school of thought,engineers, doctors and scientists have done lot of work to improve the relationship with reality. It could be physics, chemistry or biology any field they constantly Discover, invent and construct to make human life more easier and simple. For example, simple things like torch, clothes and burner requires industrial manufacturing process that are based on scientific know how. Yet, there are drawbacks too. All weapons for scientific contribution as well and worst of all atomic bomb and chemical weapon that cause mass destruction.
Hammering the last nail, I personally feel that both have influence human being in in their own way
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in contrast, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15789473684 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83414766951 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646616541353 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6388237556 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138711892066 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420885703129 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646626329286 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900734956574 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681533026991 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.