coins and paper money will soon be replaced by credit and Bank cards. eventually, we will have cashless society which will we safer and more convenient one. extent do you agree or disagree
Some individuals believe that in future plastic
Cards will be used at the place of coins and paper notes. Which makes the cashless community and leads to more protection of money and also more convenient to carry. I partially agree with this statement although characters are worthwhile, but the importance of coin cannot be overlooked.
To begin with, transaction would be easy through the plastic cards as, these cards are electronic cards which makes the transaction easily because of new techniques. For example, nowadays majority of individuals like to use electronic cards for the payment of different things such as in shopping, payment of bills and etcetera. Which are more safe as compared to cash in hand. Even, it is very convenient to carry in pockets. Moreover, financial transactions through the credit cards are more safe because without the password these cards are useless. Which leads to destruction in pillage in society.
However, coins and paper money are still a way of payment in many countries like in undeveloped areas since, in certain areas in majority of individuals are unable to use these cars because of the lack of knowledge about the usage of electronic cards. to illustrate this, in undeveloped areas such as Bihar, the people use paper not for the payment of things because of the minor understanding about cads. That is why, coin and notes cannot be replaced by these cards in some areas.
in conclusion, usage of cards is dependent upon the knowledge of person and it is mostly used for big payment but, paper notes can use at any time in either on big or small payment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95220588235 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66259482912 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507352941176 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1679876986 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.615384615 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153140709356 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634622947595 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489899248185 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853723115668 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941880817179 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.