In most countries, multinational companies products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life.Do you agree or disagree?

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In most countries, multinational companies products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life.
Do you agree or disagree?

These days, multinational companies are mushrooming at a huge rate and providing hundreds of nearly all sorts of products in the market that has a devastating impact on the quality of life of local people especially those who are dependent on small business which they owned. I strongly agree with this statement and I will explain my point of view in the following paragraph.

To begin with, multinational companies claim that they provide employment to local people which is undoubtedly true. However, people become dependent on these companies and do not take any initiative to start their own business. Nevertheless, MNC's frequently change their location which ultimately leads to unemployment. Apart from this, the products built by multinational companies are of the same quality as a local product but they are more popular due to their brand name.

Additionally, multinational companies are emerging in every city of the nation due to which people come across the same kind of products and they do not get variety even if they visit the different state of the country. Besides this, many multinational companies have insisted people sell their property as multinational companies have to construct their building. For example, In Mumbai, India, many people were forcefully evacuated from their shelters because the place was required to set up a plant of a company.

To conclude, I would like to say multinational companies are becoming outrageous in a society which has a detrimental impact on the lives of people. Hence, the government should devise a system to address the problem caused by these companies and encourage the local business to not abondon their places due to the fear of any company.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, apart from, for example, kind of, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27777777778 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92010907965 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3641286487 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.545454545 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209770178045 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829504535867 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651699642031 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130075474872 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427939688199 0.056905535591 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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