Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrollment officer. In your letter
• explain why you are writing
• describe your circumstances
• ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course
Dear sir,
Recently I read in the local newspaper that your college is offering a short-term website designing course during these summers. I am writing this letter to request you to enroll me in this course.
Firstly, I would like to share some of my background details. Since childhood I was keen of computer games and studying computers but unfortunately I never took it as a formal studies, as my parents wanted me to become a lawyer. However, I am a successful lawyer now and practice in state court.
I am still interested in learning computers and this course would benefit me as I could expand my law-practice experience by maintaining a website portal that displays my work. I wanted to request you to give me admission in this website designing course. It would be a great learning experience and an opportunity to attain my interest of studying computers. For any further information you could contact me at 401-258-9665.
I look forward for a positive revert from you regarding this matter.
Your's sincerely
Harry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, look, regarding, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95290465883 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3450943315 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0909090909 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184819018431 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067909676939 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049663607366 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111994448119 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379722624012 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.