Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are some more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Environmental problem is foremost discussed topics around the world nowadays. some believe that loss of specific species and animal are leading environmental problem today. on the other hand, the rest of them is an advocate of another more significant environmental problem like air pollution.
Firstly, Human being intended to do deforestation and logging for urbanization, which is the root of climate change, and responsible for the extinction of biodiversity. If the trees and organism do not retain the harmony of ecology, several pollutant particles will devastate the community. For instance, a survey says that land with dense vegetation keeps their community bloomy and long-lived. In this way, the expend of distinctive kind of plants and animals are the base for climate change.
However, I opined that there is assorted significant environmental puzzle nowadays, which make the earth unstable. Such as, contamination of air by the emission of the carbon footprint from industry and vehicle is a crux in an urban area. Similarly, a natural disaster like drought, famine and e flood also occurs for global warming. Moreover, throwing hazardous waste to the ocean put in the water table high in coastal areas. To illustrate, some environmentalist says that, most of the capitalist nations resolve to build skyscrapers through deforestation which form more intense environmental hazards.
In conclusion, though the attenuation of some generic species of the world, which is venturesome for the environment, is conceived by some people, however, other's valid reasons are more acceptable to mitigate climate change during this period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55555555556 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08927997981 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646825396825 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8178046004 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.692307692 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23498126369 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770308847693 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821450820649 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149194586841 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910016602856 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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