When you face difficult problems in life,what do you feel is the best way to solve them?
Every person faces problems in each stage of their life, which helps them to grow, learn and explore more. therefore when facing problems asking from experienced people will get you to your destination in less time and more Easliy.
Firstly,Problems teach us the new things to explore and learn and by asking someone experienced we can face that problem in much less time,personally,when I got problems in my 9 class ,so I asked my best friend (yonus) cause he was in the 10 class,which he had experienced the things that I’m going to experience and learn therefore when I got my assignments My problems got started the first problem was writing an essay which I was bad in it, first however I was thinking about how write and sat for like a day then by seeing my problem my mom suggested me to ask from someone who has experienced it , though the only person that came to mind was my best friend, so I went to his home and asked him to write an essay and explain, by seeing how he wrote and explaining how to write, I got interest in writing ,therefore I liked to write 2 to 3 essays per day, which I couldn’t even write one essay per day ,moreover by submit my assignment my teacher gave me 10/10.
Secondly, without problems our life would be meaningless by doing the same thing everyday and got nothing new wouldn’t help us to achieve anything, I still remember that I was 14 years old that my family planned a trip to Tashkent, therefore when we get there we didn’t knew to how speak to them cause they don’t know Persian nor English languages and we got stuck in there for a day, then by calling my Uncle which he knew Uzbeki and had experienced ,he helped us to get a room and thought us some Uzbeki words to communicate,and the new thing that he thought us was how to bargain without knowing their language, moreover by typing in a calculator we can bargain with the shopkeeper, and purchase things.
In conclusion, I would like to say that experience is a gift from god that help us to do anything in a very tiny time and So Easily.
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- Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
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- When you face difficult problems in life,what do you feel is the best way to solve them? 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48941798942 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77161176736 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515873015873 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 20.1344086022 372% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 365.204928773 48.9658058833 746% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 339.4 100.406767564 338% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.6 20.6045352989 367% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.6 5.45110844103 360% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135088940435 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990081327699 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583132100462 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993729201707 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807425610102 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.5 11.7677419355 319% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.27 58.1214874552 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 10.1575268817 297% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.95 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 32.0 10.0537634409 318% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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