Many people associate money with happiness and think that the more money one has, the happier they should be. Do you agree with this statement? Give relevant examples from your own experience
It is believed by a wide range of people that satisfaction and happiness are closely correlated with money and if someone is wealthy, they will lead a happy life. Although joy is sometimes related to wealth, I believe that being rich cannot guarantee a lifetime happiness.
On the one hand, there are number of reasons why some people assert that having high amount of money can make people pleased and satisfied. The first reason is that, if people can purchase whatever they are wishing for, such as, luxury cars, modern houses, cutting-edge appliances and many other valuable items, it will live up to all their expectations and will make them cheerful . Another reason is that as being wealthy makes people to be in the center of all the attentions and being accepted not only by their peers but also by a variety of other people, they feel satisfied and joyful with receiving endless attentions. As a result, it is thought by wide range of people in societies that being full of cheerfulness and happiness is directly related to the amount of money individuals can have in order to acquire their wishes.
On the other hand, in my opinion, although being reach can bring higher status level in the society, it cannot make people pleased and satisfied all the time because there are many valuable items that are not reachable only because of money. People experience many different feelings throughout their lives which are sometimes difficult to deal with and being moneyed does not make any difference in experiencing them. For example, if individuals lose their beloved and their dearest one’s due to death, it is almost impossible to change this kind of sorrowful feeling and become elated again with spending money.
In conclusion, I do not agree with the idea that being rich can make people delighted all the time because there are several types of emotions that happiness cannot be substituted for them by money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...t, if people can purchase whatever they are wishing for, such as, luxury cars, modern house...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...expectations and will make them cheerful . Another reason is that as being wealthy...
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Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...nly because of money. People experience many different feelings throughout their lives which a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94785276074 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53901465227 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527607361963 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.2023147528 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.3 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273209107779 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123148698351 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589262280974 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189531928896 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223007339271 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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