1. Individuals today have more information about health than at any time in the past. Yet, people are increasingly suffering from fitness – and diet- related diseases.
Why is this happening? What can be done to prevent it?
In today world moving fast people also moving faster to that, in a daily routine life people are not focusing fitness because of modern technology, changing food habit, changes in working atmosphere, due to that peoples are got in to laziness.
In past decade people’s regular work which make them fit but today the work is doing by so many technology’s it made people lazy to work. Even though some of them are doing regular workout to be fit by going Gym, Swimming, Running etc.
The teleworking and IT people are mainly affected because they are spending time in working at a particular place it causes disease to health. For instance, obesity, diabetes, heart diseases etc.
According to this people prevent them for such disease need to spend time for health, otherwise they want to do expenses money in medical and hospital to prevent their life.
Government and private sector motivate the workers to protect health issue, and the welfare law should implement to safe guard employees.
In a nut shell, there is a popular quote “Health is Wealth” by focussing in health it led a peaceful and dramatically life.
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| 2019-05-25 | venkatesh1018 | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'peoples'?
Suggestion: peoples
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 1207.87684729 79% => OK
No of words: 190.0 242.827586207 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02105263158 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73155359485 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 379.143842365 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7204021639 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166849061809 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066350481256 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392459105672 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766360420795 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318143626076 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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