Some cities in the United State of America declared a curfew on young adults for a specific time of the day especially at night and must be accompanied by an adult, in case they need to be out late at night.In my opinion, this is a very good development because it will ensure their safety at all times.
Security , is one of the most important things for everyone, teens are no exception to this irrespective of their ages and family background. Firstly, a stay-at-home order between a particular time of the day levied on young adults by the government will ensure they are free from any form of harm. Secondly, it is a common knowledge that evil perpetrators carry out their dastardly acts when when it is dark to avoid being seeing. In addition, youthful exuberance is another factor which affects the teens and it comes with its negative impacts. Some of them likes to party which is not a bad thing but going partying or clubbing dead in the night is not an acceptable norm and the society should discourage this. In fact, some of them gets drunk and will risk driving in that unstable state of mind. A recent, research shows that most Night- Crawlers constitute a nuisance to the society, causing trouble and invariably get arrested for one offence or the other.
Another, research shown that 80% of road accidents and casualties that occur in different states in the US mainly involved teenagers and some of them lost their lives while many ended up being maimed or physically challenged. Emergencies are taken care of with tax payers fund , which could have been used for other important sectors like Education, economic growth of the nation, state security and health just to mention a few.
In conclusion, it is imperative for the government to take such a stringent measure to keep the teens out of trouble and secure their future. More so, it is the desire of every nation to have healthy citizens especially the young adults because they are the future generation. For this reasons, i opine that government has done a good thing by imposing curfew on teenagers.
- You work for a company and need time off work 73
- You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to you manager. 73
- You are going to your friends country to study and need help to secure a job while you are schooling, write a letter to her for assistance. 73
- A large company has decided to sponsor a local team sports or two open-air concert in your community. 84
- Write a letter to your boss about your company's poor reception area and give suggestions 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... case they need to be out late at night.In my opinion, this is a very good develop...
^^
Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e their safety at all times. Security , is one of the most important things for...
^^
Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: when
...etrators carry out their dastardly acts when when it is dark to avoid being seeing. In ad...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s are taken care of with tax payers fund , which could have been used for other im...
^^
Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...use they are the future generation. For this reasons, i opine that government has do...
^^^^
Line 7, column 296, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...he future generation. For this reasons, i opine that government has done a good t...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7756232687 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5908442837 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584487534626 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7682228026 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.615384615 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7692307692 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239471903311 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069925705485 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733203185308 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146999445119 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929375494597 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.