Nowadays, children play less with others and this has an impact on their development.
What are the reasons for this?
Does it have a good or a bad effect on children
To date, when the technology has been overwhelmingly developed, children tends to spend all their day life being alone without communicating with others. This supposedly leads to a number of negative effects on their mental and physical conditions which are not good for their health and life.
First and foremost, there is no doubt that lack of communication might result in lack of social skills which youngers have to deal with. They may not know how to behave standardly towards others. They may not know how to solve emergency situations which will be met in life because of their apathetic to their surroundings. These facts might become many obstacles in their near future.
Moreover, being alone can drown them in some mental illness. In this recent time, such mental illness as depression and emotional disorder leading to negative thoughts are increasing in youngsters. Some of them are able to fight to these mentioned issues and become stronger, while many others are fail when facing. The worst thing happening to these unlucky children that they have too much bad feelings and they harm and kill themselves.
Nevertheless, it goes without saying that being the same as ups and downs happening in youngers’ life, dealing with staying alone is one of the life skills is necessitated. Every coin has two sides; therefore, what they need to learn is how to solve them.
In conclusion, youngsters in this modern time have to balance between social and personal life to grow up in a perfect way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 107, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a perfect way" with adverb for "perfect"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...een social and personal life to grow up in a perfect way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04365079365 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6687533172 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4800342572 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7692307692 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188656692161 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593782088064 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536552840058 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101009902233 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618387774838 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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