Topic: Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Happiness is an indispensable emotional state that many people always pursue in their life. Although the definition of happiness seems to be difficult to explain, there are some basic needs that play critical roles in achieving happiness.
It is quite challenging to give a full explanation of happiness because the requirements of each person are different and nobody can fully understand another’s feeling. For example, as for a poor man, a family with lots of children is such a financial burden for him. All that he needs is a wealthy life. On the contrary, some rich people who live alone usually dream about a caring family with a lot of members to share their feelings and they can enjoy life together. Moreover, life is practical, once people achieve their goals and experience happiness, most of them want to get more because their demands are not fulfilled yet. As a result, it is impossible to give a precise definition of happiness.
Although the definition of happiness may vary depending on each person’s perspective, I believe that there are still some common factors which make people happy. Firstly, people cannot live happily without having a safe place to sleep and enough food to eat. Eating and sleeping are the prerequisites for every activity of humans in daily life. Secondly, having a family to care and protect is also a precondition for a happy life because no one is content to live in complete isolation. A family is a place where you can express your emotions which all the members who always understand and love each other. Additionally, thanks to family, each person has a sense of purpose which motivates them to overcome difficulties and gain success in their life.
In conclusion, although it is not easy to describe the nature of happiness accurately, I believe that food, home and family are the keys leading to a happy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'giving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: giving
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, as for, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98734177215 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81713830442 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550632911392 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2022663817 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.066666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166791853938 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592083157684 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525446233447 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130938887226 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481637400459 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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