Holding International games such as the Olympic Games is an exciting event. Some people think it has positive effects while others argue it is a waste of money. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion
Throughout the world, many special events related to games such Olympics, Asian sports are held every year. On the contrary, some people believe that organizing games at global level is a big squander of money, while, others disagree with this notion. Following paragraphs will epitomize and scrutinize both views before my opinion is given.
Beginning with the supporters of people who opine that expenditure on international sport events is inadequate and irrelevant as the finance used for funding these games may be used on various other amenities like hospitals, infrastructure etcetera. A good example of this is cited in India, where, a hospital was incorporated recently to promote and provide health care and treatment facilities. Further, spending on such activities is beneficial for the people more than global competitions.
At the outset, op-posers of this view believe that such sports bring name and fame, stimulate friendly competition and enhance the relationship between nations. Since, these events are held on such a wide scale, these become representative of the country itself, and boast the friendly bonds between nations as they clash openly on equal terms with each other. Moreover, players also gain a considerable amount of prestige and money for participating in these games.
To put the nail in the coffin, even though the monetary expenditure on these events may be used for other services, I agree that it is still better to organize these event as some of these are held to collect figures of money for charity purposes and for the prosperity of ill.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'game'.
Suggestion: game
...e world, many special events related to games such Olympics, Asian sports are held ev...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this event' or 'these events'?
Suggestion: this event; these events
...ree that it is still better to organize these event as some of these are held to collect fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, moreover, so, still, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24705882353 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78567765544 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619607843137 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0507050725 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.8 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188822990512 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728306412508 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523271632911 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118996231396 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654935438354 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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