The number of people at risk of serious health problem due to overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? What can be done to solve the issue?
The several fat people is burgeoning day by day which give rise to many ailments in the society. Some contributing reason to such rise are availability of fast food, sedentary lifestyle. However, remedies like exercise, meditation and yoga can aid the person in tackling this issue.
As for the causes, monumental number of aspects are held responsible for this malady. In all of them, the one that stands out most is the couch potato lifestyle of modern-day people who tend to sit all day on their seats either looking at their PC or mobile phones. In repercussion, their metabolism consumes less energy which lead to overweight. Another obvious factor is the intake of fast food outlets which consists of high amount of carbohydrates and unhygienic nutrients which help in putting up the weight on an individual. A good example of this is cited in Singapore where people usually eat junk food to cope up with their hectic schedule of work.
A common remedy to this problem is exercising each day and prohibiting oneself from living too much of sedentary lifestyle by participating in as much as competition which involves physical and mental activity to accelerate the metabolism expenditure of a person. In exception to this, there is also meditation and yoga to bring calmness to mind along with lessening the fat every day with some quotidian tasks.
Considering each aspect problem related to overweight, number of methods are available to harness them. It is something which should not be ignored as a malady which is possible to be tackled by dieting and other simple things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir PC or mobile phones. In repercussion, their metabolism consumes less energy wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01132075472 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79534271678 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0109497019 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123673357983 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470565626974 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355159140733 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742090293921 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400949760995 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.