You have recently started work in new company. Write a letter to your friend.
In the letter
Explain why you change job, Describe your new job, Tell him your other news.You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear john,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and to the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to share with you one of my recent achievements that you would love to read.
You would be happy to know that now I am a senior test engineer in the world’s renowned organization, Google. Last month, I got to know from one of my friend about this job vacancy and I did not missed a second to apply for the same. Fortunately, With the grace of word and after multiple rounds of interview I got selected.
My training had already started from this month and I got amazed to see the office infrastructure. The work environment is really professional and the office policies are employee friendly. Along with that they offer us multiple facilities such as gymnasium, cafeteria, sports events.
Another news that I want to share with you might sound a little depressing, my work location is going to be Ohio and I would move there after my six months of training. Therefore, I invite you to visit my home so that we could spend some quality time together prior to my relocation.
Hope to see you soon.
warm regards
Harry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear john, I hope this letter finds you in radiant ...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'miss'
Suggestion: miss
...nd about this job vacancy and I did not missed a second to apply for the same. Fortuna...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as gymnasium, cafeteria, sports events. Another news that I want to share with y...
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Line 9, column 131, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: thereafter
...on is going to be Ohio and I would move there after my six months of training. Therefore, I...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Warm
...location. Hope to see you soon. warm regards Harry
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Line 13, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Hope to see you soon. warm regards Harry
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, second, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62926829268 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65701903432 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614634146341 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.77391735 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0833333333 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158579573457 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581150659484 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623802798606 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982253445823 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740790015096 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.