You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• explain the important event
• apologise for the situation
• suggest a new arrangement
Dear Freeman,
Trust you're doing well. This is to inform you that I won't be able to travel down to see you as agreed due to unforeseen circumstances, which is of utmost importance and we'll need to reschedule another meeting time.
An unfortunate incident happened during the week along Lagos- Ibadan express road that took the lives of about 20 people. My grand dad was one of the individuals who lost his life in the ghastly accident. My family and I need to organise his burial ceremony at this time.
I sincerely apologise for any inconvenience our earlier agreeement may have caused and i wish i could Stick to our agreement but i can't.
Let's shift our meeting to the 23rd of next month at the Burgundy hotel in England as I'll be free during that period. Instead of spending just two weeks with you, I would spend the rest of the month with you to make up for this change. I look forward to seeing you.
Your friend,
Jumoke.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Freeman, Trust youre doing well. This is to infor...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...r Freeman, Trust youre doing well. This is to inform you that ...
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Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...eed to reschedule another meeting time. An unfortunate inci...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e his burial ceremony at this time. I sincerely apologise for any inconvenie...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... earlier agreeement may have caused and i wish i could Stick to our agreement but...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...r agreeement may have caused and i wish i could Stick to our agreement but i cant...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...wish i could Stick to our agreement but i cant. Lets shi...
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Line 6, column 153, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...sh i could Stick to our agreement but i cant. Lets shift ou...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Stick to our agreement but i cant. Lets shift our meeting to the 23rd of ne...
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Line 8, column 22, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...nt but i cant. Lets shift our meeting to the 23rd of next m...
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Line 8, column 107, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...nth at the Burgundy hotel in England as Ill be free during that period. Instead of ...
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Line 8, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s change. I look forward to seeing you. Your friend, Jumoke.
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Line 10, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...forward to seeing you. Your friend, Jumoke.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56470588235 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45643001995 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694117647059 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.919219127 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165795691503 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673759024896 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601303909583 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721562427683 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428473697818 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.