Some people believe that newspaper is the best way to learn about news, while others believe that more effective way is through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Online news has become a growing trend, yet arguments about its utility and accuracy seems to not be ceased. While many believe this is a crucial change, others remained their love and interest for the old-fashioned newspaper. Personally, I think both media are necessary.
Acquiring information vividly and time-efficient is the main reason of e-news. While the information would have to take days to be considered and printed in newspaper, online news allows us to see the whole view within hours. This method is more preferable since curiosity wants people to catch up with the news as fast as possible. Moreover, information through the Internet comes from many sources of media, which means individuals can provide their own vision of news. This action generates the advantageous side of e-news by helping viewers see the same story at different facets. Additionally, online news is enhanced by their footage and videos of the scene, making a profound impression towards their viewers. For instance, the assault and attack on black men located in New Jersey is recorded in footage so viewers would see how the incident actually happens.
On the other hand, newspaper stands by its precision. Information provided by this traditional method is carefully supervised and released. The process of printing newspaper go through a strict department to filter whether the news is transparent and worthy to be publicized. Meanwhile, many individuals on Internet news alter their content and title to manipulate viewers, hoping they would believe and follow-up with the false news. This action leads to inaccurate information spreads on social network and affect society negatively. Needless to say, accuracy and integrity is the most significant when it comes to news report.
Regarding the favorable impact of both traditional and modern methods of publicizing information, I believe that we should combine these media to read about news report.
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- The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world costs numerous governments' expenditures. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some people think the most important thing about being rich is that it gives a person an opportunity to help other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- In many countries, people can eat a wide variety of food that are grown in other areas. As a result, they eat more food produced in other regions than local food. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36156351792 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83594592884 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618892508143 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2520678536 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8235294118 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204126202149 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621796905899 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458973199276 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135956882115 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259796094176 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.