More people are spending their free time watching movies.what is the reason for this? Is it a good or a bad thing?
Many people nowadays are found sitting in front of laptops or television and watching movies in their leisure time.This is considered by most of the people as a source of relaxation. However, I feel it has a negative impact on one’s health which makes it a bad option.
To begin with, due to globalization people are facing lot of challenges, both physically and mentally, in order to have work life balance. They have to give their best performance in order to stay in competition. In such situation, majority of the population look upon watching films as a best way to rejuvenate themselves whenever they are having spare time. Films, not only distracts them from their routine worries but also makes them social, as they get an opportunity to meet their friends. To exemplify, a survey in UK showed that increasing number of people spend their weekend watching movies as they found it as a stress buster.Thus, many peoples mental stress is alleviated by watching movies and thus it is a preferred option by masses.
However, we can not ignore the negative effect which it adds to our lifestyle. It encourages a sedentary lifestyle. Certainly people lack physical activity as majority of them nowadays have desk work. Hence, the only time when we can engage ourselves in some physical exercise is during leisure time. If that free time also we waste by sitting and watching movie, then ultimately it may cumulate some extra pounds and can lead to obesity and other health related issues. To illustrate this, a study in Australia showed that obesity is inversely proportionate to lack of exercise. In other words, watching movie in free time can indirectly cause weight gain and have hazardous effects on one’s health.
In conclusion, even though public finds it recreational, watching movies in spare time can promote an unhealthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, may, so, then, thus, i feel, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06168831169 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78036411426 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561688311688 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7554485307 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.933333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219552646015 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655414896176 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454351990426 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128736133076 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350193574566 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.