Accommodation and transport problems are increasing in many large cities. Businesses are encouraged to move to rural areas. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?
Nowadays, everyone needs all requirements to live life so, they move from rural to urban area. A recent decade are witness of development in industries sector. Amid this development, there is one phenomenon that has associated with it. In order to this phenomenon development of accommodation and transport problem has increased in major cities. So, it is encouragement that industry sectors move to countryside area. There are several merits of movement of business from city to village as well as it has demerits which are connected with it. I will try to throw light upon explain about advantage or disadvantage of business in suburbs. Also, I will try to posit my perspective about it.
To commence with, there are multifarious pros to shore those people who believe that profession sector has to move to suburb area. First and foremost, the unemployment rate has been decreased if businesses are moved from urban area to rural area. Furthermore, people get opportunity to work in that sector to obtain enough salaries as well as they do not need to transfer in metropolis cities. Secondly, the most favorable advantage is that cities have no pressure about declining the forest, as well as pollution. To addition, all the business person try to offer all the facilities to their employee as well as government also expanding the services like transport and road service that led to improve living standard in countryside area.
On the other side of spectrum, there are plethora demerits related to these problem. The predominant reason that has associated with it. According to this reason is the clean atmosphere are deteriorated. To justify, if people divert their business to suburb area than the factories are more likely to exhaust the dangerous gases like carbon dioxide or H5N1 which contaminate the air. Secondly, the another cons is that reduced the number of farmland from countryside area. Consequently, the organic food will become extinct if that is replaced by companies. It is feasible that people mostly rely on that job instead of cultivate which led to scarce of food in near future.
Aggelomerating, all the point I elaborated that plethora of negative aspect of transfer work station to rural area lead to environment problem as well as cultivation problem outweigh the positive aspect of business. Which are considered by government and start the business with limited number to focus with environment factor that is why, I support this statement because rural area is only source to produce crop. Hence, it is more fruitful in my opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: ON_ADDITION[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in'?
Suggestion: In
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
... there are plethora demerits related to these problem. The predominant reason that has associ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2154.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11638954869 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85090651855 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515439429929 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.9 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0701359913 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.652173913 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3043478261 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82608695652 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197746812834 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491271881546 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594544251598 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115512215093 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607530568872 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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