Government should spend more money for the construction in railways rather than in roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Give examples and evidences to support your position.
State should invest more budget in railways as compared to other means of transportation. The given recommendation is highly disputable. Different people may have various position on this topic. However, on my opinion, I believe that the truth of this statement is limited.
To begin with, I partially agree with this statement. Railways is the most cheapest form of transportation after water transport. Since water transportation is quite impossible so, railways could be the cheapest form of transportation. People can travel more distance in short period of time. Railways can replace number of vehicles at a time therefore pollution could be decreased. Population density will decrease of a certain place. For instance distance between Butwal and Kathmandu can be traveled in in half an hour. Hence people of Kathmandu will migrated to Butwal.
On the other hand, I partially disagree with the above statement. Nepal is the country with hills and rocky mountains, the construction work will be quite difficult. If the construction work will be made then also it would be very costly. For the operation of railways, it needs fossil fuels or electricity. In the context of developing country like Nepal, there is scarcity of both fuels and electricity. so, we have to source of energy for it which will be more expensive. We need a lot of skilled manpower related to railways in a short period of time which is also hindrance. For instance, there is lack of low pilots, train engineers and so on. So, they should be produced in short period of time or should be imported.
To recapitulate the above, allocation budget depends on various factors; geographical boundaries, economic status of the nation and many more for the construction of railways. So, the nation should look after the construction of roads too which is equally important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, for instance, in short, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13245033113 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97862360626 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539735099338 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8554908967 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.3913043478 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1304347826 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17391304348 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118464869859 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332857244235 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292876464755 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761811713567 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.017529870644 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.