Nowadays, television is an essential part of our lives, as a medium to spread news and awareness, and, for some, it even acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?
One of the most conspicucous trend of today's world in the colossal upsurage in the using of televission important part our life. Ther is widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad of concern in the our life. In my opinion television has more negtive impact than postives the our life.
On the one hand, crities may point out that one of the most significant benifets of televission is the awareness ability. In past time, people do not touch with whole country but now changed. People can easily agian any knowledge with help of televission.
On the other hand, there are several arguments in favour of my stance. On of the most preponderant ones that television has negtive consequences for the our life in various way. Firstly, people mostly depend on television but some time media telecast fake news. Secondlay, a large portion of film industary make crime move then, youn age learn how do crime in socitey with help of movie.
Lastly, in my opinion, television should use for entertainment because alot fake adverstisment telecast on television an some time people face alot of problem when they buy product with help of television.
In view of arugments outlined above, one can conclude that despite having some benefites, the drawback of television, in the our life are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94170403587 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67460126491 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609865470852 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0987595489 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8333333333 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.33497536946 394% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148242301884 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537555328823 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502577095064 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809675933983 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490969598291 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.