Nowadays, television is an essential part of our lives, as a medium to spread news and awareness, and, for some, it even acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this?
television is an essential part of our life and we have to agree to this. As in 21st century everyone is engraved in technology, it has captured the youth completely. daily routine is very fast but television is one gadget that is most important in all family.
In early days people do not have profound mode of entertainment, in search of entertainment they need to travel distance, television help us to get all under one roof. it is not only limited to entertainment, but we get NEWS, sports, TED Talks, Food guidance and many more. everyone is learning on daily routine, television has become an essential part of family. Being a status symbol as well, now we have SMART television, what more we need. The need to watch more around the clock has given the entertainment market a boom.
but looking to the other prospect of the same, television is also making our family and relationship nuclear. Adult, youth and children rather going outside and enjoying the companionship of society and neighbor they are chained to this equipment of virtual world, children are addicted to meaningless cartoons. In a journal of Harvard university television was mentioned as an idiot box. In an article in The Hindu it was mentioned that entertainment firms are cultivating a virtual world within television which is lucrative but also spoiling our society and youth. families are wasting good time watching television rather enjoying healthy discussion among themselves. The natural form of Art, sports, Gathering and Seminars are no more welcome.
To end I would say technological adaptation for the society is good and indispensable, but over addiction to this Idiot box is a shame.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06093189964 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9457437954 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5770609319 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4374892146 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1333333333 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.93333333333 7.25397266985 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168542727334 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587716140306 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675682906958 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100253076735 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361047362601 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.