In that modern era, humanity can't separate itself from media especially televisions. To be honest, it causes some advantages and disadvantages to humanity. One of the merits is getting information about different topics has become easy. On the other hand, that easy-reachable information brings about some detrimental sides such as the presence of wrong information with true ones.
People can achieve some ideas about most of the recent things through access to televisions. With the help of this accessibleness, everyone can be informed about casual important daily issues. For example, some natural disasters occur such as earthquakes and tornados in every second. People can know about these unlucky situations and they can take some precautions towards these dangers.
Despite the advantageous sides of televisions, there is huge information pollution which estimates some confusing attributes and conflicts in society. Everyone knows that everyone can have the same primary knowledge about most of the vital issues about daily lives thanks to widespread television access. Due to this likely situations, some corporations need to be outstanding to get more attention from people as serving different news. Most of the times, this news are wrong and malignant. For example, some people pump wrong statistics about current natural disasters such as estimating different numbers of dead persons. Unfortunately, these people don't hesitate to make confuse and worry people to establish more rating.
As a result, there is not the only merit such as achieving a little information about significant elements of our lives but also the detriment such as being exposed to wrong impressions of important issues. I hope so, people are becoming more cautious about reliable and unreliable news because people have needed to learn how to distinguish this information.
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- Journalism is one of the most difficult jobs in the world. What’s your opinion? 77
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, for example, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53846153846 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90736736194 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587412587413 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3240704388 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149690449525 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549418692246 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275458943617 0.071462118173 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973820257739 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252194077547 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.