As the world has been improving, space researches have been finding a place as time goes by. People have lots of aims to do researches to estimate success. However, there are not only benefits to it but also debates about it. While some group of people does not agree with these researches because of a huge amount of money spent on it, another group of people defense the presence of these researches.
During the improvement of the modern era, people have been becoming more interested in scientific researches. Moreover, everyone wants to learn and have some ideas about these up-to-date studies. Furthermore, as a result of searching for space studies, people and scientists have been concerning about the future of the world. For example, Elon Musk is one of the well-known scientists having the company of Space-X. He has many ideas and theories about this future with possible solutions such as to resident in Mars.
On the other hand, people have been arguing about the total money spending on these researches in the space. Besides, governments have to spend and estimate a bunch of money to maintain these space examinations. Additionally, there are several homeless and poor people who are suffering from hunger and a lack of shelters. However, most people do not help these people or the current help is not efficient for these people. As a popular argue to these people, the government should estimate the investment for poor people instead of space studies.
To sum up, the researches can be beneficial for us to make probable solutions for the oncoming problems or the money invested in the researches must be invested in poor people. In my opinion, humanity must have the most appropriate way to deal with both problems to prevent coming disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 281, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ace studies, people and scientists have been concerning about the future of the world. For exam...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 31.9359605911 157% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68734657775 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52027027027 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5816019038 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.25397266985 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251631911633 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880378429026 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455756997479 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151895320971 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435755922861 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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